15 May 2010

Blow a Fuse

Don't blow a fuse
We have no excuse
Thoughts that are obtuse
Tends world to confuse
Which makes me amuse

To see beyond race
Skin and color needs
Minds that are wise
Cease all deeds vice
Don't blow a fuse
Little time to lose

Water the soul nice
World peace will arise
Load the love missile
Use many smile device
Don't blow a fuse
Little time to lose

Humanity will alone strive
May  nations practice poise
For unity paves praise
Earth has no price
Don't blow a fuse
Blue Terra won't refuse

7 comments:

seema said...

wow! nice one... keep it coming girl...:)

Saras said...

Beautiful Acrostic! Excellent Read.

vani said...

@seema- thanks gal, waitin for your next post.

vani said...

@saras - thanks a ton, your opinion means a lot, you were the first to comment on my acrostic, thanks again cheers!

Anto said...

Good one...this literally brought peace for me :)

"Water the soul nice
World peace will arise
Load the love missile
Use many smile device
Don't blow a fuse"

One of the best composition I have read in recent times...keep rocking gal!

vani said...

@Anto - 'palm on the face', thanks muchly....you rock!!!!

Leo said...

hi vani, its a lovely poem... i dont think it is an acrostic though..

cz in acro, the first letters of the lines spell out BLOW A FUSE. i.e just a nine line poem.

u can check it HERE